Saturday, October 8, 2005

A Place That Is Pure Comments

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A grand building was built
so that people could come to worship.
The cup of blood was forged out of gold
so that people would not mind drinking
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ngaio beck 01 July 2008

I say old fellow, I like this one.Don't worry about the catholic religion you've abandoned, soon it will be gone along with all 'christianity'.All that will remain, (of that lot) , is the television 'circus' religions.

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Linda Weischedel 04 December 2007

GREAT JOB! Always, Linda

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 08 October 2005

this poem has impact and i could relate to it as i was brougt up in that religion...nice work

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 08 October 2005

Good for you! ! ! ! Very well written! ! I feel the same.

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