Sunday, April 20, 2014

A Place In You Comments

Rating: 4.8

How can I have a place within you?
I honestly care about your tender ways
Thinking your protection every moment
Loving every details of your life
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Captain Herbert Poetry
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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015

Love! With a place within. Nice work.

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I honestly care about your tender ways Thinking your protection every moment.. nice lnes...10 it is good search to reach and gains tability with blessings from an almighty

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Bharati Nayak 20 June 2015

Written with such passion and beauty it is a great poem on love.

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Ninette Carey 23 May 2015

Beautful spoken! ! A gift of Love to be truly cherished! ! !

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Hazel Durham 19 May 2015

Beautifully written expressing great passion and truth pouring from your besotted heart!

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Nancy Oyula 16 January 2015

Very well written. I love: -)

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Ging Taping 04 September 2014

nice one... treasure every moment.. for we are just a passers by..

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Sonali Ganguly 16 May 2014

beautifully expressed.....

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Amymalia Houston 06 May 2014

Wonderful creation and masterpiece. Burning and passionate love

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Helena Zen 06 May 2014

Two thumbs up on this poem. Great

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Maria Luzong 04 May 2014

Understand whatever your past Forgetting what lies around and behind you I don’t mind what others ‘r saying Just give me a little room upon you Each line is so Lovely powerful and very nice and beautiful. Hands up. Thumbs UP. Well Done

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Marjonie Clares 04 May 2014

...it will start in small size then the love will overflow. BRILLIANT poet

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Venus Lim 04 May 2014

How elusive to pass inside your heart to get the love of the dearest one APPLAUSE on this poem Thumbs up to the poet

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Mae Navales 04 May 2014

I feel an honest commitment and faithful love to the beloved. So beautiful and lovely

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

BRILLIANT! ! ! I love the climax at the last stanza

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Jonas Goncalves 03 May 2014

Brilliant poem! The eleventh verse invaded my mind...

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Tina Chan 01 May 2014

Like the topic of love. There's always a place for love in one's heart. If not then make room!

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Susan Wall 01 May 2014

very nice well said and very loving, keep up the good poems.

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Susan Wall 01 May 2014

Very sweet, i enjoyed keep writing

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Jose Santos 01 May 2014

If your heart is open only for a dot-sized. Your words and lines are so deep. Well crafted

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