A Place I Wish Comments
Lying on the bed with imagination ruling my mind,
I wonder if there exist a place where happiness I can find.
A place far away from this selfish land where I can be me,
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Dear Sayli Your Imagery is real wonderful I love reading this poem Thanks for nice read keep it up I invite you to read my poems and put comments
hah...you look for nirvana....elusive dream there nice lines fluid and easy to the tongue :)
Such a brilliant write. I do share this dream. Please continue to write.
Asking questions is the best way to improve our imagination-finding answers will lead to another questions and answers. Good work
rhyming scheme of the poem is just mindblowing great write to start with wish you a bright future
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7/25/2025 5:49:08 PM # 1.0.0
Why you sent such person in my life who are not meant to be, Why have you sent me in this world where I can’t be me. Millions of questions I need to ask to Lord for this suffering, Where is the place you exist lying on the bed I keep wondering… ASking the Lord so many questions. life and love and a real love life is mystery. we dont find answers to so much of our own thinking and experiences. tony