Wednesday, June 19, 2013

A Place I Wish Comments

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Lying on the bed with imagination ruling my mind,
I wonder if there exist a place where happiness I can find.

A place far away from this selfish land where I can be me,
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2020

Why you sent such person in my life who are not meant to be, Why have you sent me in this world where I can’t be me. Millions of questions I need to ask to Lord for this suffering, Where is the place you exist lying on the bed I keep wondering… ASking the Lord so many questions. life and love and a real love life is mystery. we dont find answers to so much of our own thinking and experiences. tony

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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Sayli Your Imagery is real wonderful I love reading this poem Thanks for nice read keep it up I invite you to read my poems and put comments

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Saadat Tahir 28 July 2013

hah...you look for nirvana....elusive dream there nice lines fluid and easy to the tongue :)

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Godfrey Morris 22 June 2013

Such a brilliant write. I do share this dream. Please continue to write.

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Sekharan Pookkat 21 June 2013

Asking questions is the best way to improve our imagination-finding answers will lead to another questions and answers. Good work

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Survi Sharma 20 June 2013

rhyming scheme of the poem is just mindblowing great write to start with wish you a bright future

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