Wednesday, January 6, 2010

A Place I'Ve Never Been Before Comments

Rating: 5.0

A place I've never been before
That's where I'd like to go
Just somewhere I can lay my head
And rest my tired soul
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Chase Breeden
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Abdullah Musa 21 January 2010

Very good lines with good use of words. The unfortunate thing about life is that it is very hard to escap our past. The past alway find a way of resurfacing.

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this is interestingly wrote its sad but interesting

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 06 January 2010

Sad, moving, and emotionally heart rending. The poem makes the reader want ot cry and surrender in exasperation at the state of things at hand, so I would like to invite you to view 'My Island Far Away' it is brief but will give you relief.: -) 10+++++

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