Friday, September 6, 2013

A Place For You To Rest Comments

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I cannot stop cursing myself
For not giving you
A better place
To rest your head
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Mohabeer Beeharry
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Mahtab Bangalee 05 June 2020

no temple anywhere like this yeah this is heart made of all holiness eternally........

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2016

That hold me to you! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hi thank you so much for reading. I shall go on keep in touch. Mohabeer Beeharry

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nice poem...10 final place in all the cases where you can rest much to the detest of lifes

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Vera Sidhwa 02 October 2013

Making a temple out of a heart, to find a place to rest is nothing but profound. Ten of ten

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Shahzia Batool 12 September 2013

i agree with all here esp. Geetha Ji.... there's a specific feel in it! ! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 September 2013

emotion is dripping from lines like nectar.would like to read again and again.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 September 2013

A wonderful sentiments poem nicely rhymd too . I hope u review my latest on gambling too.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 September 2013

Wow. Beautiful poem...i loved the words especially...I have made this heart a temple, a place where you can rest your head..So pleasant and cool. Loved reading it.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 September 2013

how do you want me to imagine? just nice to keep the head to take rest...

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