Monday, December 16, 2013

A Place For My Madness Comments

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All I ever wanted was a place for my madness
A place for my joys, a place for my sadness
A place where I can lock away all of my fears
A place where my dreams can lie on for years
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Katelin Taylor 11 July 2014

This is so beautifully written and I think is one of the best poems I've read on this site. Everyone must have that place for their madness, their flaws, their hopes and dreams, their failures and successes and for me that place is poetry so it's very fitting that your description of this place is in poetic form. The rhymes are great and it doesn't seem forced at all. Immensely well done - this is going on my poem list and with your permission I might post it on my Facebook page.

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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