Wednesday, January 7, 2009

A Place For Me Comments

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is there a place for me
in this shrunken world I see
may it be the last
may it be the best
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Maria Sudibyo
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 January 2009

Nice poem, Maria...... Keep on searching and writing. There is a place for everyone in this small world.

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

very nice poem i like it a lot and, i know u r not that u r not the Maria of my poem, anyway, i am sure u look nice too, thx for the comment.

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i like the carry on of thoughts in the second and last stanza reinfor es the title and message, indeed we all search long and far to find our right place, great philosepy and write

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