Tuesday, January 8, 2008

A Place Called All Alone Comments

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This story is about a broken heart
I bet you've had one or two
When your heart is in a million pieces
You look at life with a different view
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Alfred Ramos
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S... Che 20 June 2008

Awww very nice poem.

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Lissa White 10 February 2008

Hiya Al... I love this poem but then again I am bias because I like all your poems Keep up the good work......Melissa

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Anjali Mandokhot 08 January 2008

tell me where is fancy bred or in the heart or in the head how begot how nourished it is bred in the eyes with gazing fed and fancy dies in the cradle where it lies ...........ur poem reminds me these lines of shakespeare....'merchant of venice' its true...its difficilt to find true love...bt if the diff of fancy and love is well understood...heart will be saved of such numerous breaks....nice penning

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