Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, June 4, 2009

A Place Called Comments

Rating: 4.8

place called "home" is to feel homely,
God's creation standing by to look so lovely,
May be she is with all her elegance,
Everything for sure and no pretence,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Marcia Schechinger 24 October 2022

A wonderfully crafted poem, with subtle tones, you bring us home. Well done, Sir!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 August 2021

A fantastic write sir... thoroughly poetic.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 February 2020

Home” is an end of universe//// really a fantastic poem penned

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Abhishek Singh 22 October 2019

Home is where the heart is. Good poem sir..

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A B Faniki 06 September 2019

Creative simply creative. Thanks for sharing suh lovely piece.

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Sachidananda Panda 28 June 2019

No clash of views even with slight reason, All days alike whether season or no season, Excellent...! dear poet. this reflects the theme..liked it..

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Julia Luber 17 March 2019

Beautiful reverent poem about home. Beautiful.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 12 November 2018

So nice thought....I want to enjoy the nature....10++++++++++++

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REZA HUNTER LION 29 September 2018

*************REZA HUNTER LION HERO- - - - - Go Home For in ZERO

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Sochukwu Ivye 16 October 2017

Elegant verse, here. So great I was carried by it until it suddenly ended. This is motivational and persuading. Thanks for educating, too, Sir. Nice job.

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Ketan Hukare 05 July 2017

Exceptional! ! ! Mesmerizing. What can I say? !

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Adeline Foster 11 December 2015

Home is a great subject for this poem. Read mine - Home Is - Adeline

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Twisted Strange 28 March 2010

This is a very deep beautiful poem.

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Bethany Williams 20 March 2010

Such beauty in a great poem. Great words used in this poem.. I had such a great time reading this....10+++

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Chitra - 29 January 2010

A 10++ for sure. A beautiful write about the place where we find happiness and solace!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 January 2010

i am the 100th person to rate this one... i gave it a 10... it's so good.

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Lean Punio 02 January 2010

a home is a place that you will find love and care... respect and peace are there when i go home... i'm going home now co'z i found the emptiness when i'm alone every single minutes my home keeps waiting for me to go back! ! ! beautiful poem! ! ! I'm going home! !

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Gul naz 19 December 2009

a fact no one can deny............10/10

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Liz Annson 13 December 2009

a place called house is where we stay a place called home is what we make thank you for sharing this with us... a beautiful poem

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Sahar Sahar 06 December 2009

A beautifuly described structure of home and its atmosphere, we dwell, with our life, ....with all serene and tranquil breaths.......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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