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ravens fly through these ways: A fear consuming you all the time, The urge to say. A very good poem. original in your thinking dear Poet. tony

u must acknowledge young man read ours too only too only then will others know you have you read my moms smiles and 11 nice ones kindly do I thank you well hopefully in advance

In dust lying down, we reside on ground, not so far away, beyond a place— So it's, The way it goes, Let it be, .sadness, desperation. the way it i s......... misery and pain.........even then we dream and hope......... let all our poems end up in positive notes. negative thinking can affect and create depression.. tony

nice poet to be read read some of my poems i shall comment and thank you u also do spread ur seeds wi win ung man lots need thee

Hanan, such a profound poem.............