Saturday, April 18, 2009

A Place Beside A River Comments

Rating: 4.8

There's a place beside a river
That you might know as well.
On the banks we call contentment
Near the place where lovers dwell.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 September 2017

So, if by chance, you see me there In a memory or a dream. You'll know I've found contentment In the water of the stream. A philosophical poem beautifully portrayed

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Bharati Nayak 14 September 2017

It's a place to leave our sorrow. And a place to not regret. A place that gives us pleasure In our sadness even yet. - - - - - - - - We hold in ourselves some loving memories that give us comfort even in harshest days. A wonderful poem of love, thanks for sharing.

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Francie Lynch 14 September 2017

Nice use of imagery. Could use a hard edit.

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Rini Shibu 14 September 2017

Found contentment in the water of streams... Beautiful lines Congratulations

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 September 2017

It's not far from heaven! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 14 September 2017

Nature, in general, has a soothing effect. This idea has very nicely been depicted in the poem. I must thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem.

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Sarah Persson 14 September 2017

This is such a beautiful and positive poem. So, if by chance, you see me there In a memory or a dream. You'll know I've found contentment In the water of the stream. Congratulations on poem of the day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2017

Beautiful poem with haunting expression full of inspiration. Congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2017

On the banks we call contentment Near the place where lovers dwell. Great line, Lovers dwelling on the bank of contentment beside the river of love! Nice poem. 10++

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Gajanan Mishra 14 September 2017

contenment in the water of the stream, good write.

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Tom Allport 14 September 2017

a wonderful feel good poem that gently flows right off the tongue? ..............well penned Greenwolfe

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 September 2017

Such a lovely and heartwarming poem... enjoyed reading this one... congrats for being picked... a perfect 10++++

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Khirod Dalpati 14 September 2017

Beautiful poem. Flawless and heart felt...

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Margaret O Driscoll 20 February 2016

Lovely flow, just like a river!

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Lady Grace 05 May 2011

i can remember the song 'hazard'.....

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Mehreen Tahir 07 December 2010

A place beside a river...what a wonderful visualization! Wish we all had one...to have 'contentment in the water of the stream'.Lovely!

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Yen Cress 31 July 2010

This is a lovely, short poem that evokes a mood of quiet reflection, so rare in the hustle/bustle world of today. Good work, Greenwolfe!

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Rose-marie Mitchell 10 February 2010

Beautiful poem! It flows really nice. It's wonderful when we use our gifts to bless others and glorify God as well. Keep writing.

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Ron Flowers 02 August 2009

I love this poem. Ron

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Saadat Tahir 30 April 2009

superb GW62 such beauty an fluidity is a rare entity... a treat...if i may cheers

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