A Pity Comments
When one is down inside oneself
and has some hidden gray agendas,
when cobwebs of the inner mind
do not conceal the rancid secrets,
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This is really wonderfully and well written, Herbert. Keep your numbers coming.No one knows which will be your best.Numbers too matter in everything.Poetry- writing is like exercising the Brain cortex.The more you write and think, the better, the outcome with time.Wish you all the best in your near future.Forget about the few rude comments that come your way.Those are the blessings in disguise and goad us all the more our way!
Yes we need to take care...To see the pitfalls. Such great writing should have sent you to no10 in the 500...... Hugs jan
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8/1/2025 9:42:02 AM # 1.0.0
We have to watch for those pit falls....good read Herbert!