Wednesday, June 13, 2012

A Pirates Fantasy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your light safely sweeping
across the ink black sea
attracts like no other
you are the lighthouse
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Simon Collins
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Subodh Pandey 24 June 2012

A lovely and po ignant write .

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Valerie Dohren 21 June 2012

Great poem, particularly like the last three lines, beautiful.

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Heather Wilson 13 June 2012

A beautiful poem in honour of a lighthouse.

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Captain Cur 13 June 2012

Strong yet endearing love poem. Magical and mysterious as that lone lighthouse and lover on the sea.

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Kasia Fedyk 13 June 2012

Simon, I love this poem, it is so touching and deep it takes me away into the unknown, it truly does, Thank you Simon!

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