Wednesday, April 29, 2020

A Pink Place Comments

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When I think of death,
I go and listen to the sermons of a religious scholar.
When I think of life,
I go and listen to the jokes of my grandchildren.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 May 2020

When I am stranded between life and death, I come back to my heart, a pink place! Where there is someone, beautiful and loving, ....wow great the pink place the best shelter of self pious can discover the self....great introspective writing

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sleeping, dreaming, and smiling. What a pink place is it, finite yet Infinite! A poem that explores the beauty of nature along with human feelings and sentiments. Thank You Akhtar Sahab! .......10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 April 2020

A lovely and heartwarming write. It depicts a life full of peace, contentment and wonders. If we follow the thoughts of the great Poet, life will never be lonely and miserable. A beautiful poem, well thought out and expressed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 April 2020

I find beauty of love, personified as a woman, with silver on her head, with gold in her old bosom, putting her head on my left arm, sleeping, dreaming, and smiling. What a pink place is it, finite yet Infinite YOU SIR ARE JUST LIKE ME ALWAYS DREAMING AND SO I ALWAYS AM IN BLUE

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 30 April 2020

stranded somewhere.......underpinned the message.fine

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