A Pinioned Swan Comments

having a beautiful or graceful quality from the heart. So lovely

nice poetic expression

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Nice work! Here is mine about swan. Hope you enjoy it, too. Go Rock, My Black Swan Go rock, my black swan! Just free your wings from the hunter’s greedy hand. Go rock, you poor man! Don’t keep hiding your voice like a silent lamb. Go rock, my black swan! Just free your body from the civilized land. Go rock, you poor man! Let the metal angel take you to the wonderland. -from GOD BLESS NOT ONLY AMERICA

Very nice composition well penned..thanks for sharing..

Birds should live freely as they are and the laws of catching them should be enacted as vetoes so that the pineons are enough in their ego of flapping wings from the pond swim and the way they carry themselves to contribute nature as words of petty poetry.Swans are emblem of white clouds what flows with them.In Asia for example India they are worshipped with the Goddess of Education-Maa/Mother Saraswati.Its no use killing them rather than exercising power on puerile.