A Pinch Of Happiness Can Be A Life Death Line Poem by Terence George Craddock

A Pinch Of Happiness Can Be A Life Death Line



a pinch is so small
yet life survival
the difference between

life and death

with severe injuries
can be just a pinch
of choice of desire

of the choice will to live
a pinch of the will to live
a pinch a pinch a pinch

until the possibility
of hope and a better life
not just survival may dawn

Friday, November 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,death,decisions,happiness,life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
Written in November 2020 on the 8.11.2020.
Inspired by the poem 'And A Pinch Of Happiness' by the poet Varsha Madhulika.
Dedicated to the poet Varsha Madhulika.
A split image from the poem 'A Pinch Of Happiness Can Be A Miracle Seed' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 20 November 2020

Contd... until the possibility of hope and a better life not just survival may dawn....such is the pinch that builds the castle of hope.

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Varsha M 20 November 2020

...your pinch word actually reminded me of my creation of this poetry and seeing it right down in your notes, it broadened my smile. Thank-you sir for making pinch so meaningful. of the choice will to live a pinch of the will to live a pinch a pinch a pinch.....in injuries when you just can't see any hope, just a pinch of desire to become to reduce pain works miracles. Then slowly to see would heel.. another pinch....

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