A Pillow Of Ego Comments

Beautiful, I have to say, I'm quite smitten with the lines 'Dreams weaved in loom of our love Will never be the fabric of our life'

This is the most incredable love poem i have ever read! i will read more of your work regards Bob

for you tonight my friend my knight i sing this song song of bane song of disdain i know u hear not for your ears are muffled by the pillow of ego u see not the light in my eyes u feel not the warmth in my heart for you are hugging yourself holding on to your sadness what if u don't hear from me your heart is my humble abode the sighs you sigh is my own the tears that fill your eyes dropp from mine on my pillow of sorrow

pillow of ego.... mmmmmmm....thought provoking... good usage of comparisons....