Friday, December 8, 2017

A Pillow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am plump, buxom
Of a pillow
Relatively happy
To shoulder the load
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Nosheen Irfan 10 December 2017

A marvel of a metaphoric piece, characteristic of your deep insight n wide perception. Social n political undertones make it all the more meaningful n relevant. A big 10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thank you my revered poetess for the great support and loving inspiration. You make me obliged.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2017

Only a single head! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thanks Revered Sir for the great remark.

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

I work for the same head, Same smell, good or bad, Same name, same fame Never my luck to blame. A poem describing dishonesty existing in many sectors of society in myriad forms. Nice poem shared. 10+++++ Rani

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Prativa Rani 09 December 2017

I work for the same head, Same smell, good or bad, Same name, same fame Never my luck to blame. A poem describing dishonesty existing in many sectors of society in myriad forms. Nice poem shared.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 09 December 2017

They can not live monotonous so they change hands.But we can create myriads of tones in the same tune.just change the cover of the pillow sir.Nice poem shared.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thanks Sir for the great remark. Feel obliged to have your attention and gracious suggestion.

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Rini Shibu 08 December 2017

Work for the same name and fame.. Some change Holding hands Good one Subhas

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 December 2017

Thanks Rini for the great remark. Feel obliged to have your attention.

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