Tuesday, March 20, 2018

A Pilgrimage Comments

Rating: 5.0

With flowers or thorn or pain
"Nay, I cannot say, towards that place solemn
That our feet trod upon and seemed
Like no other ground of this earth upon we ever walked
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2018

Emotional and heartfelt final farewell to a noble soul. This is indeed a great tribute to a friend's mother whose absence will be felt by those who knew her and loved her. May her soul RIP. Thanks, Deepak ji. And we, with an ocean of tears in our eyes wandered out in solemn night Into that holy funeral home with her mortal remains to explore the truth And it was moon soft, fair and still Lighting up his shadowy eyes in dole Looking at her calm and kind face

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Many many thanks......Rajnishji.......I am humbled

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2018

Fresh and beautiful life still in silence perceives truth about amazing effect of life. Beyond the twilight and the dawn and deep in the hidden glory of heaven truth is imagined. Death is truth and this brings separation with own affectionate persons. Death of mother gives pain to her children. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned that brings emotion...10

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Many many thanks Kumarmaaniji......I am very much humbled

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2018

This masterpiece will go to my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2018

A timeless piece beautifully crafted and well executed. Very touching. My heart melts for the friend who is in utter deep agony. I liked all the beautiful lines of this wonderful write.Splendid verses pulled me to go through..A very gripping narrative. EXCEPTIONAL.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 March 2018

For the truth is a mystery and always lives through Beyond the twilight and the dawn Deep in the hidden glory of heaven...Beautiful lines from a masterly crafted poem.

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Many many thanks Rose Marie......I am very much humbled

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