A Pile Of Memories Comments

I know I just had to include my dad...hmmm might keep them both here but seperate the poems...its how I've always seen them...together hmmm

I thought it was very touching the way you remembered your mother like that, the only criticism (and I have no right to say) is that it seemed strange to introduce your father when the subject was more centered on your mom, I found it took away from some of the resonance of matriarchal love into a patriarchal cynicism, I noticed you connected that to you mom. Either way its a fitting tribute to both your parents.