Tuesday, January 13, 2009

A Piece Of Heaven Comments

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When teardrops fall from your eyes
A piece of Heaven just died tonight.
A fallen angel lays broken
Your final blanket is wove.
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Cory Jensen
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Linda Hepner 21 January 2009

Interesting rhymes, Cory. You've got the sounds without being exact and it works.

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Jacob Courtney 15 January 2009

another poem well done. It is very great. Like i said i really enjoy your poems. again i could imagine it all in front of me. it is hard to push love away

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Hope Wallin 14 January 2009

Wow..... You know, this really reminds me of Roxas and Kelly, for some reason I just can't comprehend. Simply amazing. Another masterpiece by you, Cory.

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Cory Jensen

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