Wednesday, January 2, 2013

A Piece Of Bread Comments

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Would you share a piece of your bread,
to a person who has none,
would you give a bowl of rice,
when your belly is full,
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Walter C. Edwards
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Brian Jani 04 July 2014

You Nicely depicted the plight of hunger in the world in this poem.

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Babatunde Aremu 02 January 2013

Good poem, I like it. Pls edit line 2, correct how'' to ''who''. Keep writing

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