A Piece Of Art Comments

Original, poetic hymn … it is beautiful...

You have successfully sharpened the intellect of your readers to permeate inside through this cajoled piece of writing… The rhetorical questions sum up the intentions and a nice parallel between the earthly artist and the great creator… Every good creation is a miracle and a masterpiece…so is your poem…very thoughtful

yes...that Artist...He is proud, for He has created us to continue His work on behalf of Him here. and the imperfections He gave us, flora...that alone drive us to think more, find more and to create more and to satiate ourselves more... and to satisfy Him that way who remains proud of you, me, usha and every being over here.... the great great Grand Father! wonderful poem, usha... simply rings into my heart. congrats. and for you too flora, for getting the theme right out in it...

But how do you know when you've finished, Usha? That's always my problem. The artist above cannot beileve that we - with all our imperfections - are finished can he? Love your poem, as always. Thought provoking. F