A Picture My Captive Comments

Giving up love is definitely one of the hardest things we ever have to do in life... I love the way you capture the struggle here... And...is it really worth it? Damned if I know: P

wow, wel written straight from the heart

it is said the hardest thing to do is change. To change to move on takes a strong spirit if true love was there for one then you become entangled in the chains of emotion. These are stronger than steel and pull you down into the quick sand of your own love. If we are lucky a helping hand pulls us free for we could not do this on our own. love the poem you write so well

Poetry is best poured...from the heart! ! Nicely done...your heart sepaks on your behalf, and does so, eloquently! ! Hugs, Dee

I know the feeling, seeing the person in the flesh. You can carry their photograph in your pocket but they carry YOU in their pocket! It's like being owned in a way, so the captivity idea is so true. Well done! S x

GW, I wish I had written this! ! The words are so close to my own heart.... I just adore this poem. Top marks for superb expression. Love, Fran xx

Wow..... this is superb, so painful, so poignant, this poem resonates deeply, I know those feelings so well. You expressed yours so very eloquently. Great write. HG: -) xx