Tuesday, May 24, 2016

A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words- - Comments

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Solitude brings forth reflection
.....Windows once shaded - now open wide
Joys & sorrows of a disconnected past - return
.........Where once undone - i would hide.
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Hans Vr 10 June 2016

Lovely poem, reflecting on wonderful moments gone by. Just a small thing, Theo, picture in the title misses a 't'.

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Theodora Onken 15 June 2016

Thank you so much for your very kind words - and also for showing me a major typo...will get that corrected asap.

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Pamela Sinicrope 06 June 2016

Lovely reflective poem brought about upon looking at an old photograph. Its funny how a certain scene or image can bring all of it back in the hands of the older version of the child. I love the last line and especially the use of the word dappled. Its a kind of poetic word, but place with a greying head is perfect. Thanks for sharing.

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Theodora Onken 15 June 2016

Pamela, thank you so very much for stopping by and commenting on this write- -it means a lot that you truly understood what i was trying to convey. Am honored that you liked this, dear.

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Susan Williams 02 June 2016

There are so many lovely evocative phrases in this piece, Theo. Then you weave them together to create a tapestry that is not just your childhood but so many of your readers' childhood. It is a bit annihilating to stroll through the family photo album and realize I had forgotten a time, a place, an event that had not the photograph not jogged my memo would not have thought of it again, would have left a piece of myself behind, lost as if never lived. Your poem reminds us to be thankful for a mind that can still remember what it does. Thank you for sharing this gem. .

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Theodora Onken 15 June 2016

Oh Susan, thank you so very much! Had know idea that you had commented on this...sorry, just have had a lot on my mind! You're spot on in total understanding of what i was speaking of. It means a lot that you get me. Your words on my writing are always an absolute blessing.

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