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Still, a piece of wondrous magnitude, such that my soul truly flew there!

The moon rises in a darkened scene In circle of grey, in black and white A melancholic skies, the eyes do capture A haunted portrait hanging on the walls of the heart. i like the beginning of the poem due to the phrases and epithets created by the poet.....it is extraordinary...and needs some merit which the poet has in abandon............

nice lines bt needs some work on it

nice poem, the first few verses need a revisit

I think there are a couple of grammar points in verses one and two that need ironing out and then this would be excellent. It's still good!

great write really like it