Friday, February 21, 2014

A Pickled Society Comments

Rating: 5.0

Meat pie, pavlova, blueberry pies
In a glass museum....
Right in front of my eyes
Temptations so hard... to resist
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Lyn Paul
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2020

A lovely poem with a meaningful message and great advice on how to take care our health. Good health is a foundation of our personality. If we don't have it, we cannot fully enjoy the wonders of existence. Healthy mind and body flow from good health.and eventually good disposition towards life.

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Louis Rams 07 March 2014

a great write and words so true, and it hurts me and you. but what kind of worls would we have if everyone was skinny? then they'd criticize that too.

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Amitava Sur 07 March 2014

A nice poem with a message on taking care on health to live a hearty and healthy life, Question is how many of us do abide by these disciplines? ..... Thanks. You may read my poem Who cares.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 February 2014

A Beautiful poem with fantastic lines.... Give your heart a chance and do take care Live life to the fullest and ignore the stares... Health is wealth...Very true said, We are A pickled society, so judgemental....Loved reading it.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 21 February 2014

obesity breeds life diminishing diseases, and you Lyn, through this poem, have drawn our attention to this issue in a positive note.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 21 February 2014

I am very cautious of what I eat...once we put on weight, it is not very difficult to lose it, if we have the determination...very good advice from Lyn Paul...thank you for sharing with out staring, dear Lyn..

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