Friday, May 8, 2009

A Picasso Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pre-dawn on the Caprock
Is a flat, even line of horizon
Appearing out of the night -
A solitary stroke to indicate a mouth.
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Paul Hansford 23 July 2009

There are few poets on PH who can extend a metaphor so long and so well as Lillian. A lovely example.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 May 2009

'Then a golden bubble Emerges from that mouth And floats into the morning. Unable to be sad for long, This blue child smiles.' O wonderful! You have caught and sketched pre-dawn nicely with noble metaphor! Exciting poem...10 for it with love.

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James Mclain 08 May 2009

It is nice to see another helping hand with ease in paint..iip

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