A PHOTO OF AN OLD GRAVE (Courtesy of Danny Reynolds)
This was once
a very grand grave,
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Fred, Thank you for the comment on my poem, this is my first day on this site and everyone is very nice. I just read this poem 'A PHOTO OF AN OLD GRAVE' And i truly enjoyed your writing style.i will certainly be reading more of your musings. Barbie
Great ending (as I sense both neglect /...and resurrection.) I once tried to release an old, small cemetery from its overgrown weeds, invading tree limbs, etc. In searching for genealogical information I have also come across a tree wrapped around a grave stone (It was so big) and actually more plants and trees than graves. There is so much art (Celtic cross) and so many stories hidden in those old cemeteries. You are contributing to our greater appreciation of the past with this poem. We should take time to look more carefully and see what’s really there.
'Do graveyards need a license for their poet-magnets? ' Enjoyed this beautiful ending.
A really atmospheric poem Fred, great work. Best wishes, Andrew
A very good question. The structure of the poem shows the widom and authority of the poet and thoughts so mature. The beginning of your poem is the ending of my poem GRAVEYARD. Thanks for sharing the thoughts sathya narayana
Wonderfully done, my friend. At some point, and as time moves on, no one will mourn our passing. As always, an oustanding effort, and as always a humble 10 from me.
Fred, this is brilliant...you create such lovely flowing expression...amazing talent '10' best wishes Jon
poet magnets! ! That's great..man I love your work, it's real, and always reflect...definately DOES NOT deserve that score 10/10 for me
Love the image here. Life is rooted in death. I'd like an apple tree on me, please. -chuck