Sunday, February 8, 2009

A Phone Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

a moment of silence
the phone rings, you
are answering it
there is never time enough
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Ben Partenay
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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009

Your last stanza is especially powerful. Your poems are always so uniquely yours. You give yourself away in words very effectively as all true poets should. Thank you for the kind words about my work. Your opinion matters. Wishing you and your talented pen well, As always, Sandra

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