A Phantom Between Words Comments

Hi! I’m Eddie Roa and I just got in to this website. By chance I came across your name in the list of poets and read some of your works. Your poem is melodious so much like Moonlight sonata or Claire de Lune. I like the easy flow of words and the delightful imagery. Good write. I have posted some of my poems today and a few days earlier. My style ranges from light to dark poetry (modern enough but not postmodern) and some Japanese verse forms like haiku, senryu and tanka. I hope you will bother to check out my work. Thanks and happy writing.

Amazing writes...........and you've just amazed me! This is what we call poetry.A poem should be written like this.Excellent writes Julian. Salamat po'

A soft and sublime dialogue with the nature! A poem which emphasizes the link between the God and the man through the elements! .......and there is a yearning for someone departed.....or someone known unknown, is not clear! To be read again and again to fathom the intent philosophy of the instant. A beautiful soulful stirring! Lovely, little sad.

You are really doing well with your poems; and, if i do know your age, i will surely know the type of real that you are following.Thanks and keep on writing. Edward Kofi Louis.

a soulful yearning... very good poetry! you are a good poet..

I agree with Fiona, this is very well written and tells of a journey through the life you have been given. When the Lord walks wiht you, you have nothing to fear. A 10 for this, and thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara

Beautifully well written...really takes us on a journey..thanks for this...