'She's just a perspicacious girl,
peeking past her long, dark hair,
her finger twisting one dark curl
in the candle's golden glare.
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So nice to read and a real interesting picture you have spun...in words!
I simply loved this. I liked the rhyme and I liked the atmosphere you created with your word picture of her. Greenwolfe 1962
Great control of thought and word that really tells its tale both interestingly and well. love Donall Donall