Monday, February 18, 2008

A Perspicacious Girl Comments

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'She's just a perspicacious girl,
peeking past her long, dark hair,
her finger twisting one dark curl
in the candle's golden glare.
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Nancy Ames
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Donall Dempsey 02 March 2008

Great control of thought and word that really tells its tale both interestingly and well. love Donall Donall

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Malini Kadir 02 March 2008

So nice to read and a real interesting picture you have spun...in words!

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2008

I simply loved this. I liked the rhyme and I liked the atmosphere you created with your word picture of her. Greenwolfe 1962

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Nancy Ames

Nancy Ames

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
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