Sunday, December 18, 2011

A Person Can Love Comments

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Do you think that I ever did anything
But bury self loathing in between your legs?
You were my penance and I loved you so dearly
Like a coward who suddenly loves God in the hour of need.
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Gus Schreiber
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Kaia Grønnbæck 18 December 2011

Intense and emotional. Words seem chosen with care. This is the kind of poem i appreachiate the most. Thank you for sharing it!

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Wahab Abdul 18 December 2011

It is a good poem indeed but I have written a little poem 'who loves whom ' is very funny and interesting

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