A Persian Rapture Comments

This was beautiful. Such a stream of consciousness. I think the tumbling words and strong evocative images serve to create a certain mindset and space of acceptance. I also like the flowing words with many consants....they're like water falling from a fountain. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

My hearty regards, good wishes and prayer for your friend Paul.Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem with us.

After the rain, the rainbow mends the sky, the day of colors appears again. Heart of my soul, your sky bow waters my eyes, and I know the name of the sun. - - - Such a beautiful poem - - - -It really has the true character of SUFI poetry as you said in your Note- - - 'a SUFI poem where the poetry ends and the prayer begins, they are so completely intermixed. '