Tuesday, April 3, 2007

A Permanent Mark Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m screaming…
It’s all too much,
I’m fed up now
I’ve had enough!
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Allyson Gordon
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Frank Cannon 10 April 2008

A tale of the ages given rhythmic voice..... admirable work Alyson.

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Michael Fischer 17 April 2007

This is a very good poem Allyson. The reading can feel the pain you write of through the descriptive wording you provide. Top marks! -Michael

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Allyson Gordon

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