Wednesday, January 7, 2009

A Perfect World Comments

Rating: 5.0

If the world were perfect,
We’d all have no eyes,
So we couldn’t judge people,
By skin color or size.
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Ashley Seymour
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Amanda Bruner 11 August 2009

I wish this poem everyday

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Tiffanie Lau 07 January 2009

hi ashley, love the irony of your ending line, 'witness the day' and its connotations to your first 2 stanzas.. hopeful poem. thanks for sharing! tiff.

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Joseph Poewhit 07 January 2009

As Adam & Eve hid in the garden of Edan from GOD. GOD said, 'who told thee that thou was naked'.

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Ashley Seymour

Ashley Seymour

Michigan USA
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