Sunday, May 14, 2023

A Perfect World Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the beginning God did make
A perfect world - land, water, air.
And animals and plants did take
Perfect time and place ev'rywhere.
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Sandra Feldman 14 May 2023

Some very fine ideas are here presented. I hope Poets are spared and not offended. Poem sincere and well intended. Full marks!

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Jayne Louise Davies 14 May 2023

Great write Ima x Thank you.5*****

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