A Perfect Story Comments

Wow quite a perfect poem too Natasha.I'm very impressed.Keep up the good work!

ok, nash.. don't attemp suicide... haha... joke... a very very well made poem... different... keep it up...

A person ending her life for she thought she has no reason... If ever you feel you don't see your reason don't kill your self ok... joke.. hahaha.. well done... keep on rocking..

Excellent poem, Natasha..thank you for sharing....be blessed................10+++++

Good touching, poignant story.you are a master story teller...god bless

Good touching, poignant story.you are a master story teller...god bless

How she failed to face her problem squarely, and took the wrong way out, suicide. Emotional to read.

Died for no reason.... For she thought she had no reason....not good step at all she should have faced the consequaences... very good write....10 read mone... never say die////when feet start crumbling.....innocence regained

Hey..Why did the themes of your poems suddenly change? Either way they're still good.But why change it? ..You're good..Really good..

so beautiful. this piece has its own mind spoken. this is so nice! ! !