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This one is hard, like diamond. You can't refute it. But I hope the writing made you more comfortble.

'Stop the glaring eyes, glaring light, glaring errors? Will it finally lay to rest the living dead, The zombies of memory, re-animated flesh of blunders past? ' hey! ! ! ! great expressions indeed..liked this very much..10 well deserved.... with love shan

Heidi, What a wonderful poem. Indicitive of your title A Perfect Rhyme! ! ! ! ! ! Barbie

this is spectacular. I was so into it from beginning to end. the use of repetition worked extremely well, it was quite compelling. overall wonderful job!