Friday, October 23, 2009

A Perfect Pair Comments

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Birds and Bees
both fly with ease
buzzing, flapping
in the breeze
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Patti Masterman 30 October 2009

Aww, you can't be a thorn if you write like this? I would gladly pluck you out, and keep you in an old book of lovely poetry, as my place marker, along with the dried flower petals..(smile)

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Rachel Butler 29 October 2009

'Thorn and Rose match perfectly' Rachel Ann Butler

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