Wednesday, April 19, 2006

A Perfect Moon! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I make the tub a prosper
Beautifying it with all I had
Aggravated to take a shower
I’ll take a bubble bath!
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Sugar Bear
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Vaughn Bekker 24 May 2010

ha ha ha, prisless, never saw that one comming, very funny, shock and hooror for your mom, lol, well written: 0)

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Con Nie 20 April 2006

An embarrassing situation put to good use in this funny poem! :) Still smiling. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Danny Reynolds 20 April 2006

Great stuff, and I'm gonna spend all day trying to find a way to use the word 'Splashidge! ' 10 from me Danny

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Veronika Knollman 20 April 2006

That would've been awkward. Good poem. :)

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