A Perfect Mess Comments

Absolutely magnificent writing! ! ! ! This is what literature is all about- bringing us to a new place and plopping us down in the real- time place and unfolding what happens there in such a way that we too were really there witnessing what it is like to live in such a place at that particular moment

Holding what might once been! Thanks for sharing.

Indeed, life isn't always such a tidy affair; thanks for sharing; congrats on being poet of the day!