A Perfect Landing Comments

yeahhhhh u bet mamta, a perfect landing could be a deadly one as well, butta throughout......nice piece!

'Have i ever seen, i wonder, \ two butterflies on the same flower' You only are capable of writing such line. I value you and your poem. Shanmugam, Chennai

In this beautiful poem two 'malis' work in harmony on a single 'phool', - how wonderful! -Raj Nandy

Top marks there.. Nice concept~

A beautiful poem with nice imagery. I moved noiselessly like a butterfly and enjoyed the nectar of this piece.10 added from me to it.

Mamta, you evoke the wonders of nature so many fail to see as they rush along wrapped up within their daily lives. Top marks and thank for sharing this my friend. Definately going in my favorites. Hugs David

a searching poetic mind...no answer yet for your quest...but you have pictured very well the flight landing reception and take off there...in your mind as well as in the poem lines there...10/10

for a great poet, whole nature is his laboratory, his workshop, to produce beauty identical on paper.....Very beautiful comparison, well maintained throughout with precision and expertise. My 10

Butterflies and flowers, and their rendezious, watched with a thoughtful eyes, , the concluding lines are so good, , , , , butterflies and bees are more intelligent and efficient than humans scientifically, ,10

10++++++++++++++++++++ Spellbound I watch this in silence And my senses revel in the image. Have I ever seen, I wonder Two butterflies on the same flower? Truth has detected your memory's eyes! !

surprise for many, why do one fear death, nature always fearless..