Monday, December 30, 2013

A Perfect Girl.... Comments

Rating: 4.3

The one who was composed of Love and clothed in the dress of truth, Who was cognizant of world's affairs, She was careless about world but Cautious of her mistakes,
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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Sounds like a very young girl, innocent, pure and attempting to do what is right in her young life. Very good, an ideal to be cherished, treasured and propagated throughout life. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 03 September 2014

Sounds like Mother Teresa in the making. I like it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 January 2014

An inspiring writing! We shud all strive for perfection. Take care fatima.

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Awara Panchhi 10 January 2014

Bohat Hi Achhi Poem Hai.

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Marvin Brato 31 December 2013

The love ones we adore appears perfect in our eyes even she is imperfect as a person....love is blind!

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