He was a perfect gent,
Who having thus been lent,
This, Oh such precious key,
With which to view a property,
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Congratulation dear old friend Earnesteine, wonderful story of love hat happens to happen as it says Together, in this prime location, Made her feel such wild elation, That, standing entranced by his side, She consented to become his bride.,10++
You have given a sweet finishing touch to the poem. After so many twists and turns she agrees at last to become his wife. With nice flow and rhyming it gives nice feeling when reading. Thanks for sharing. Congrats.
This is just one lovely piece of work! Thanks for sharing!
Standing entranced by his side, She consented to become his bride. The spell of cupid marvelously swayed. Congrats on the member POD.
Precious sky says about wonderful universe. To flow just behind moon smiles here. Prime location is made for wide sense. Very amazingly drafted poem this is really.Interesting one.10
What a perfect gent to make every reader elated...there is something more perfect than the content....that is the way you've crafted this...rhyming words sound musical too...like it- 10
He was a perfect gent, Who in the time they spent Together, in this prime location, Made her feel such wild elation, That, standing entranced by his side, She consented to become his bride. Great piece! ! ! .... Congrats for being chosen for the day....
Wonderful poem, Ernestine! A perfect gem of a poem and well worthy of being poem of the day. Congratulations!
I liked this one such a pleasure to read very well done. Regards Dave T.
Absolutely beautiful Ernestine, a lovely story with a very happy ending. I love stories with happy endings. Melvina
A lovely story with a happy ending. Well written indeed. Andrew x
Charming story. I too was waiting in trepidation for a disapointing ending. Instead, a delightful happily ever after read. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Hi Ms Ernestine, Congrats on being selected the poet of the day. This lovely poem, on how love blooms, definitely deserves the credit.