Wednesday, March 8, 2006

A Perfect Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I had a dream of you
We were walking down a beach
Everything felt so perfect
My life just felt complete.
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Crystal Johnson
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Arielle Perkins 11 March 2006

I love this poem, its so heart felt and sincere. I know we all dream of things and never want to wake up. But have faith maybe someday youre deam will come true.

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Mary Nagy 10 March 2006

Crystal, this is so nice! You really have a great ability to express the longing...I'm amazed to think you are 14! Great job! sincerely, Mary

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Uriah Hamilton 08 March 2006

A very lovely poem, always continue to write!

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Elishavah Ma'lak 08 March 2006

It spoke so clearly to my heart, for it touched very close to home.

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Mickey Pig Knuckles 08 March 2006

Oh Crystal, Your poetic talent is glowing brightly as your words of passion reach out and gently touch your reading audience with the warmness within your heart. Yes, even dreams can be a bit of reality as many times they are real as we feel the emotional impact they have on us and provide us with a vision to be captured within our minds eye. You have painted a very beautiful dream which I hope comes true for you. Thank You for sharing a little of yourself and for giving us all a small part of your creative personality through your passion of poetry. Your Friend, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)

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Crystal Johnson

Crystal Johnson

Maury County, Tennessee
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