Saturday, September 30, 2017

A Perfect Bake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sift yourself to remove
the husk from your life
The finer you are
the perfect will be the bake
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Rini Shibu
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 October 2017

Shake, make! A perfect bake. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 07 October 2017

Thanks for reading Edward Rini

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Nudershada Cabanes 30 September 2017

A positive poem.inspiring a delicious read.

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Thanks for your delicious read Nuder

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Gajanan Mishra 30 September 2017

serve your delicious desert, good one

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Thank you so much Mishra...

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Rahman Henry 30 September 2017

Excellent poem, in deed. Thanks to share with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 September 2017

The husk from the life must be removed for it to bake perfectly. Nicely written. Thanks for the sharing.10+

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Thanks Subhas, glad you liked it

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Rahman Henry 30 September 2017

Excellent work, in deed. Thanks to share with us.

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Rini Shibu 30 September 2017

Thank you so much Henry.. Rini

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