A Perfect Autumn Day Comments

Wonderful description.... perfectly aligned.

I can feel the poem, indeed it's perfect autumn. Beautifully written with intricate details captures readers heart and mind...It takes the reader into another world. Beautiful poem.10

Looks like you had some amazing moments of magical beauty. Lovely poem

Yes, indeed it's a perfect autumn day. To find pleasure in little things in our surroundings is the best a human can do. The imagery is vivid n evocative. The reader takes a walk with you through this lovely autumn day when Nature is at peace. And the warmth of friendship n relations is felt in the air. I love the philosophical touch you give to the poem by reflecting upon the direction n purpose of our mortal journey. A great write. A perfect 10.

A very meaningful poem. You focused on small things of immediate wonder- - - flowers turning to sun, birds asserting their territories with song- -You also wonder about the purpose of our journey, that nature destined for us, and who are with you in this journey- - -your friends- -from your immediate family to distant friends- - - - spread from Minneapolis to Petersburg- - - - The poem has deep spiritual undertone when it says 'Soon after I finish my litany, shafts of darkness pierced the woods, and I hastened my steps. As I drove home, night completely enveloped this perfect Autumn day. ' An amazing write, thanks for sharing.