Saturday, February 28, 2009

A Perennial Flight That Life Is. Comments

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During the youthful period, most of us face the following situation when our friends would be leaving our dales in the hunt of a job. The precepitation is loneliness and a state of disappointment till we also begin to take on to our wings.
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Upon these dales
We were one feather,
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Ravi Panamanna
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Yelena M. 30 October 2009

'Here, within the veil of mist, Melodious nights return to my dreams. Here, within my diminishing circle I am the only answering echo..' Beautiful lines with the touch of melancholy and nostalgia..Very true, thanks for sharing, Ravi. Yelena M.

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G. Murdock 30 July 2009

I sense a convergence of effulgence and determination. We are not taken by the wind but determinably navigate its currents. The bird is like a ship in that sense...or a vessel which is carried and in its breast the spirit. As we travel others in our flock are coursed and carried away. The bird is the highest form of metaphor for either diaphonous existence or dream of escape. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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Indira Renganathan 23 June 2009

Life indeed is a perennial flight, ....this is lovely...a truth well penned

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Mamta Agarwal 19 April 2009

lovely, nostalgic poem of days gone by. concluding lines are philosophical- very true; life is a perrenial flight. 10 mamta

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Vinod Ak 11 April 2009

Fabulous expression! It reminded me of my school days, during the visit to my native place. The company of my village friends and cousins was the most attractive feature of the days in native place! Visit to the hometown is not charming anymore and is rather ceremonious, because the peers are all busy in 'amassing' the grains.

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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