A Pensive Gray Mood Comments

Both fool and wise say about grey mood. Defeat is not the last step because we can win again. A pensive grey mood is wonderful definitely. Closing doors and opening hears give wonderful sense. A marvelous poem is shared with wise thought...10

Poignant and morose but sadness is a universal trait as nobody can be happy each and everyday. Your great talent at rhyming and metaphor ought to cheer u up. This was written superbly. Warmest regards. Great to read from u again.

My friend, that is one very pensive gray mood. You certainly know how to write this across the miles to your readers- - the only thing I've ever found to work with this kind of emotion is to ride the sucker out. Crying if that does the trick. Wailing on a dirty rug. Glaring at innocent strangers [yes, I really have done that, I can be such a beast at times], writing it out. That last option is the most productive. If you don't believe me, look at what you produced in this poem! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Ah, but tomorrow is another day. (Usually) : -)